Analysis of Nobody's Child



Journeying back from
the train station
I went to see
the dark room
again.
There is no other place
to hide
and in the absence
of love
I feel like
nobody's child.
Deep inside, I pray
to God
for my naked wounds.
Yet, listening to
the crying walls
speaking for me
I can sing their cry
can you hear?

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Scheme XXAXXXXXXXXXXXXXAXX XX
Poetic Form
Metre 10011 0110 1111 011 01 111101 11 00010 11 111 11 10111 11 11101 11001 0101 1011 11111 111 101111 1101
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 325
Words 67
Sentences 5
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 19, 2
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 13
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 136
Words per stanza (avg) 34
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Submitted on March 15, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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