Analysis of My unborn to my first Newborn



I found out I created a new baby,the doctor

told me the dute date June 23rd, or maybe.

I had the ultrasound they said it was a

boy, now I have to go and spread the joy.
Names on my mind and the future ahead,

pretty soon I will be in the hospital bed.

Nine months later would you believe,

It's 5:17 and it's Garnett I receive.

Born on the 21st who would of guessed, my

first labor one hour, the nurse said I was

blessed.
A little bundle of fun is my six pound, ten

ounce new baby son.
Named him Garnett after a basketball star,

now 4 months old, enough to eat from a jar.

How fast they grow, I never expected, but

there is nothing that I would have rejected.


Scheme X X X XA A B B X X XX XC C X X
Poetic Form
Metre 111101001110 1101111110 1100111110 1111110101 1111001001 10111100101 11101101 10110101 110111111 11011001111 1 010101111111 11101 1110100101 1110111101 11111100101 11101111010
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 641
Words 135
Sentences 8
Stanzas 14
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 2, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 2, 2, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 30
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 36
Words per stanza (avg) 10
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Submitted on November 01, 2009

Modified on March 05, 2023

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