Analysis of My Paradise



I awake to a beautiful day,
stretch and yawn as I may,
should I get dressed just to play.
I could go skating in the park next door,
or put on some music and dance on my floor.

Maybe I'll have a picnic out on the lawn,
still batting my eyes, I stretch and yawn.
I could go out dancing, and stay till dawn,
put I did that last night that's why I'm so tired.
watching t.v. wouldn't be so hard.

Breakfast is a good idea right now.
some toast and juice and coffee , wow !
Service in bed, ''thank you ''.
Hey, did you make enough for two ?
As I stretch and yawn , I cover up my head,
Hey, why do anything, let's just stay in bed.


Scheme AAABB CCCXX DDEEFF
Poetic Form
Metre 101101001 101111 1111111 1111000111 11111001111 1011011101 110111101 1111100111 111111111110 101110111 1010101011 11010101 100111 11110111 11101110111 1111011101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 619
Words 130
Sentences 12
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 5, 5, 6
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 153
Words per stanza (avg) 44
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Submitted on October 16, 2012

Modified on March 05, 2023

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