Analysis of Tu Boca (Your Mouth)

Delmira Agustini 1886 (Montevideo) – 1914 (Montevideo)



Yo hacía una divina labor, sobre la roca
Creciente del Orgullo. De la vida lejana,
Algún pétalo vívido me voló en la mañana,
Algún beso en la noche. Tenaz como una loca,
Sequía mi divina labor sobre la roca.

Cuando tu voz que funde como sacra campana
En la nota celeste la vibración humana,
Tendió su lazo do oro al borde de tu boca;

—Maravilloso nido del vértigo, tu boca!
Dos pétalos de rosa abrochando un abismo…—

Labor, labor de gloria, dolorosa y liviana;
¡Tela donde mi espíritu su fue tramando él mismo!
Tú quedas en la testa soberbia de la roca,

Y yo caigo, sin fin, en el sangriento abismo!

I was at my divine labor, upon the rock
Swelling with Pride. From a distance,
At dawn, some bright petal came to me,
Some kiss in the night. Upon the rock,
Tenacious a madwoman, I clung to my work.

When your voice, like a sacred bell,
A celestial note with a human tremor,
Stretched its golden lasso from the edge of your mouth;

—Marvelous nest of vertigo, your mouth!
Two rose petals fastened to an abyss…—

Labor, labor of glory, painful and frivolous;
Fabric where my spirit went weaving herself!
You come to the arrogant head of the rock,

And I fall, without end, into the bloody abyss!


Scheme ABAAA AAA AC BCA C DXCDX XXE EF XXD F
Poetic Form
Metre 110101101110 11111101 1111111111110 1111111101010 1011101110 111111010010 11101111010 1110110111110 11111110 111110111 10101100001011 1111111111 11111011110 111111111 111101100101 10111010 111110111 110010101 0100111111 11110101 00101101010 111010101111 100111011 1110101101 1010110100100 10111011001 11101001101 0110110101001
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,263
Words 223
Sentences 13
Stanzas 10
Stanza Lengths 5, 3, 2, 3, 1, 5, 3, 2, 3, 1
Lines Amount 28
Letters per line (avg) 32
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 91
Words per stanza (avg) 22
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Delmira Agustini

Delmira Agustini, a Uruguayan poet, is considered one of the greatest female Latin American poets of the early 20th century. more…

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