Analysis of Moving on



I sit alone outside in a mild August night.
Crying in the darkness.
Deciding to stay till daylight.
Thinking about our fight.
Back then in the cold June night.

It was stupid and unimportant.
Like you said I am.
Words.
Created to hurt and destroy.
Created to stay in my mind.

I am with him now.
He isn't that special.
Won't ever be but tonight I don't care.
Life is anything but fair.

I sit alone outside in a warm September night.
Enjoying the darkness.
Deciding to stay till daylight.
Forgiven is our fight.
Back then in the cold June night.


Scheme abAaA xxxxx xxcc abAaA
Poetic Form
Metre 110111001101 100010 101111 1001101 1100111 111000010 11111 1 01011001 01011011 11111 110110 1101101111 111011 1101110010101 010010 101111 0101101 1100111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 524
Words 101
Sentences 19
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 5, 5, 4, 5
Lines Amount 19
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 105
Words per stanza (avg) 25
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Submitted on April 20, 2012

Modified on March 05, 2023

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