Analysis of Monsoon thoughts



Rain clouds hanging down,
Touching the earth; shading.
Even last ray of light vanished,
Pouring down skimmed darkness

Birds of same clan flock together,
dropping, the days content,
Opened beaks oiling the feathers,
waiting for the downpour,

Wind whistles through trees.
creaking, cracking bamboo shoots,
humming a tune for monsoon,
hailing arrival of season in pomp.

Insects creep into their tiny holes.
Snakes beating the retreat.
Dry leaves fall incessant,
flutter with scrubby dry murmur.

Mind wanders soaked in good hopes.
This long wait ends after all.
Smell of earth intoxicates,
swashing the hoods in ecstasy,

At last the rain ripples on the roof,
In rhythmic divine music.
Several silver globules hang-
On the cloth line; falls on her naval

Earth quivers in first shower,
shivers In cold streaking rain.
Jasmine flowers lie scattered,
spreading soft fragrance of her hair.
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Scheme XXXX AXXX XXXX XXXA XXXX XXXX AXXXX
Poetic Form
Metre 11101 100110 10111110 101110 11111010 100110 10110010 101010 11011 1010011 1001101 1001011001 11011101 110001 111010 10110110 1101011 1111101 111010 1010100 110110101 0100110 101011 101111010 110110 1001101 1010110 10110101 1
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 871
Words 141
Sentences 12
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 5
Lines Amount 29
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 104
Words per stanza (avg) 20
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Submitted on August 04, 2017

Modified on March 05, 2023

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SATHEESAN RANGORATH

I was born Indistrict a small village called Elappully,at Palakkad in Kerala, India.After my studies in commerce, I took a job In a bank In United Arab Emirates. worked there for almost 27 years. poetry is my passion. I have not done any serious publication of my Poems in a book form, But I hope one day my poems shall come out in book from. During 1998 Poetry.com selected my poem Hymn Of Liberation as the editors choice poem. cheers. more…

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