Analysis of Submergence

David Herbert Lawrence 1885 (Eastwood, Nottinghamshire) – 1930 (Vence)



When along the pavement,
Palpitating flames of life,  
People flicker round me,  
I forget my bereavement,  
The gap in the great constellation,
The place where a star used to be.

Nay, though the pole-star  
Is blown out like a candle,  
And all the heavens are wandering in disarray,
Yet when pleiads of people are
Deployed around me, and I see  
The street’s long outstretched Milky Way,

When people flicker down the pavement,
I forget my bereavement.


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Poetic Form
Metre 101010 1000111 101011 1011010 01001010 01101111 11011 1111010 010101100001 11101101 01011011 01101101 110101010 1011010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 452
Words 78
Sentences 3
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 6, 6, 2
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 117
Words per stanza (avg) 25
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David Herbert Lawrence

David Herbert Lawrence was an English writer and poet. His collected works represent, among other things, an extended reflection upon the dehumanising effects of modernity and industrialisation. Lawrence's writing explores issues such as sexuality, emotional health, vitality, spontaneity, and instinct. Lawrence's opinions earned him many enemies and he endured official persecution, censorship, and misrepresentation of his creative work throughout the second half of his life, much of which he spent in a voluntary exile he called his "savage pilgrimage". At the time of his death, his public reputation was that of a pornographer who had wasted his considerable talents. E. M. Forster, in an obituary notice, challenged this widely held view, describing him as "the greatest imaginative novelist of our generation." Later, the literary critic F. R. Leavis championed both his artistic integrity and his moral seriousness. more…

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