Analysis of Mistake



I made a mistake
now Im paying the price
Apologies made, you are as cold as ice
I'm not perfect and neither are you
I made a mistake, guess Im not allowed
You are perfect, you live on a cloud
I hope you move on, its a brand new day
there's nothing more I can say
Im not kissing your feet or going out of my way
You say its about respect
Well its a two way street
Im not gonna kiss your feet
I made a mistake
Im not saying any more
Its a brand new day to see what's in store
OMG!, I cannot do this anymore
I said Im sorry its done!
Now its time to have fun


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Poetic Form
Metre 11001 111001 01001111111 110101011 1100111101 110111101 1111110111 1101111 1110111101111 1110101 110111 1110111 11001 1110101 1011111101 11101101 1111011 111111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 538
Words 121
Sentences 3
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 18
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 425
Words per stanza (avg) 121
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Submitted on September 25, 2015

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Teresa Nicastro

I am a registered nurse for last 4 years. I am married and live in Phoenix AZ for the last 23 years. more…

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