Analysis of Missing Me

Anny McNeilus 1982 (Minnesota)



I understand that Im not the me that you want with you...
But understand that the love this me has for you is so deeply true...
Understand that the me you love is still around...
She just needs some faith from you that cant seem to be found...
You say when you see then your faith will come-
well, d*mn it-could you at least sometimes throw me a crumb!!
Im still here, just so sick of your doubt-
"IM HERE" how loudly should I shout?
I'm sorry that me is a bit off-not quite right....
But she is so close, even within my sight...
Its not fair that you can put my Love on hold...
Leaving me shaking from the cold...
Your ups, your downs...
Your smiles, your frowns...
I accept and love everything about you..
Why cant you show me that your love is true?


Scheme AABBCCDDEEFFGGAA
Poetic Form
Metre 1011110111111 1011011111111101 01101111101 1111111111111 1111111111 11111111011101 111111111 11110111 110111011111 11111100111 11111111111 10110101 1111 1111 1010110011 1111111111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 737
Words 146
Sentences 14
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 16
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 35
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 557
Words per stanza (avg) 146
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Submitted on February 23, 2016

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Anny McNeilus

Writing since the 9th grade I think... LoL best time for a girl to find an outlet... And I just Love words.. I'd like to expand to song writing as well-though I'm a bit clueless on the how-to... Any helpful hints and suggestions are welcome and greatly appreciated-I'm loving this site-as I am broadening my spectrum on what can b defined as poetry... Thank u all for sharing n for giving my words a chance to flow more…

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