Analysis of Me, A Soldiers Wife!



You ask why I don't cry?
You look amazed and worried too.
In front of me lies a body,
My family cries and my child too.

You ask why I don't cry?
My reply – Cause, I am The Soldiers Wife.
In front of me lies, the body of the Soldier who I married,
The father of my child, the love of my life.

A man so young and brave.
Who I knew, loved me a lot, but had a duty to do.
In front of me lies a body of a warrior,
In front of him, how can I cry?

No my tears won't come,
They dried the moment I tied the knot.
Knowing that though he was the soldier, I was his strength.
On every journey that he went, I never cried.

I can't cry, Cause I had promised him,
I will always be strong,
No matter how difficult things will be without him,
No matter how much it hurts right now.

No, I wont cry, Cause I know his sacrifice isn't in vain.
He died protecting his motherland.
This soldier will be looking up from heaven,
And I won't want him to feel bad.

I won't cry.
Not for my child, Not for Me,
Not for my husband.
A Soldiers Wife I am,
And A Proud Widow I will always be.


Scheme Abcb Adxd xbxa xxxx exex xxxx acxxc
Poetic Form
Metre 111111 11010101 01111010 110010111 111111 1011110101 0111101010101110 01011101111 011101 11111011101011 0111101010100 01111111 11111 110101101 1011110101111 1100101111101 111111101 11111 1101100111011 110111111 11111111101001 11010110 11011101110 01111111 111 1111111 11110 010111 001101111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,031
Words 224
Sentences 19
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 5
Lines Amount 29
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 112
Words per stanza (avg) 32
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Submitted on February 14, 2014

Modified on March 05, 2023

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