Analysis of Me and my tears



This shattered glass
cuts at my moment, still
bleeding from my hurt,
searching for the
canvas of my tears.

The trampling of my
shadow darkens my step,
Falls from my side
curled in a corner,
watching from the distance.

I feel my honesty slowing
me down, smiling, while
I walk to my finish.
My tears are the CHEATING
sequence of my sweat and
my sweat is the driven
wetness of my honesty.

Where is pain, Why can't
I feel you. Where have you
gone.

Where can I go to dry
my tears, and look for
the next day?


Scheme XXXXX AXXXX BXXBXXX XXX AXX
Poetic Form
Metre 1101 111101 10111 1010 10111 01011 1111 1111 10010 101010 11110010 11101 111110 111010 101110 111010 1011100 11111 111111 1 111111 11011 011
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 480
Words 98
Sentences 7
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 5, 5, 7, 3, 3
Lines Amount 23
Letters per line (avg) 17
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 78
Words per stanza (avg) 20
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Submitted on June 22, 2010

Modified on April 13, 2023

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