Analysis of Mama's Sonnet



Mama, please let me help you wash the sheet,
for your passion is faded pink, not red.
As sweat drops into aluminum wash pan between tired feet,
your burdened mind weighs heavy as the bedspread.
Discolored from dirty soles and playful bliss,
it lies beneath white bubbled clouds of soap,
marked by children aware of something amiss,
while above the chaos, your mind stays afloat.
Fantasy wishes to replace present with the past,
intermingled with grumbles of discontent for your life;
Distant memories of youth and frivolities that last,
you wanted more than to be a housewife.
You try to console yourself--never mind--hush;
back and forth you scrub with the bristled brush.


Scheme ABABCDCEFGFGHH
Poetic Form
Metre 1011111101 1110110111 1110101001101101 1101110101 01011010101 1101110111 11100111001 10101011101 100101110101 0101101001111 10100110111 110111101 11110011011 1011110101
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 660
Words 112
Sentences 5
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 14
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 39
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 541
Words per stanza (avg) 112
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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