Analysis of Love Storm, Rain Storm

On the rooftop
I hear the rain.
Tornado warnings expected,
Will school be canceled?
Despite the danger,
I long to go outside
And stretch my arms and open my eyes
In the cold, stinging, night water.
I long to stand in the eye of the storm
Sprayed with mist and broken dreams,
Love and broken hearts.

Poetic Form
Metre 111 101 1101 0110010 11110 01010 111111 011101011 00110110 1111001101 1110101 10101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 306
Words 59
Sentences 5
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 12
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 249
Words per stanza (avg) 59
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

17 sec read


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