Analysis of Longing (Haiku)



in that forest's eye
see the roof of my homeland
still longing for me

Neli Fatu de Valahia
Toronto - Fall of 2010


Scheme XXX XX
Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Cinquain  (20%)
Metre 01101 101111 11011 1111 01011
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 109
Words 23
Sentences 1
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 3, 2
Lines Amount 5
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 45
Words per stanza (avg) 12
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Submitted on March 15, 2011

Modified on April 10, 2023

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