Analysis of Like an old servant



If you do not let me enter that room
Where are the only moments of love
Like as the clouds is touching the hills
My body emotions like as the falls of the rain
Now my heart also like a knock on my body

There is the sun light up all the time
There are the aroma air on fully flowing
If you drive mevout of the room
I will not go from there
I will be worshiped like an old servent


Scheme AXXXB XXAXB
Poetic Form Etheree  (30%)
Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 1111111011 110101011 110111001 1100101101101 111101011110 110111101 110010111010 1111101 111111 111101111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 369
Words 82
Sentences 1
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 5, 5
Lines Amount 10
Letters per line (avg) 30
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 149
Words per stanza (avg) 41
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Submitted on June 18, 2017

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Shib Shankar

Bhangar. Kolkata.India 743502 more…

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