Analysis of Life is what I Feel...



I arrived in anger,
a complete stranger,
seeking peace,
selfishness decrease...

I didnt request the hate,
it came to me freely,
from across the sea,
ancestors to live free...

Where it all began,
who remembers?
Why it still exist,
the mind cant resist...

Adults with 'hand-me-downs',
acting like a flock of clowns,
no reason to change,
a living derange...

Ive come to break the curse,
sent away in a hurst,
not needing to be first,
love is my thirst...

Entering in through the exit door,
no reason to even any score,
mending to each sore,
rising from the cold floor...

Hate is my enemy,
striking from behind,
crawling up my spine,
entering my mind...

Now...,
life is comfort,
life is peace,
life is real,
life is what I feel...


Scheme AABB XCCC XXDD EEFF XGGG HHHH CIXI XXBJJ
Poetic Form
Metre 101010 00110 101 10001 110101 111110 10101 10111 11101 1010 11101 01101 011111 1010111 11011 01001 111101 101001 110111 1111 100010101 110110101 10111 101011 111100 10101 10111 10011 1 1110 111 111 11111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 694
Words 129
Sentences 10
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 5
Lines Amount 33
Letters per line (avg) 16
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 68
Words per stanza (avg) 16
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Submitted on April 17, 2015

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Donald Vess

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