Analysis of Lesbians Bar
No more sounds of horror and violence,
But they were lots of women whispering.
In lesbians bar, faces seemed beautiful and
Some were more manly then my own self.
Who taught you to speak of a poet words,
Who's lips you adored between me and her.
Our eyes talked to each others feelings for
The first time, but you ignored mine with tears.
I have never owned my heart, since it was
Your favourite neckless that gave it to away.
The heat of emotions is real and fully warm,
While I'm siting with your old pictures of us.
I stopped blaming you, since it was my fault
To love a woman who held my soul inside of her.
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Metre | 1111100100 1101110100 010011011000 101101111 1111110101 1110101100 10111110101 0111101111 1110111111 111111101 011010110101 11101111011 1110111111 1101011110110 |
Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 607 |
Words | 119 |
Sentences | 8 |
Stanzas | 7 |
Stanza Lengths | 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2 |
Lines Amount | 14 |
Letters per line (avg) | 34 |
Words per line (avg) | 8 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 68 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 17 |
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Submitted on June 05, 2015
Modified on March 05, 2023
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