Analysis of Lesbians Bar



No more sounds of horror and violence,
But they were lots of women whispering.

In lesbians bar, faces seemed beautiful and
Some were more manly then my own self.

Who taught you to speak of a poet words,
Who's lips you adored between me and her.

Our eyes talked to each others feelings for
The first time, but you ignored mine with tears.

I have never owned my heart, since it was
Your favourite neckless that gave it to away.

The heat of emotions is real and fully warm,
While I'm siting with your old pictures of us.

I stopped blaming you, since it was my fault
To love a woman who held my soul inside of her.


Scheme XX XX XA XX XX XX XA
Poetic Form
Metre 1111100100 1101110100 010011011000 101101111 1111110101 1110101100 10111110101 0111101111 1110111111 111111101 011010110101 11101111011 1110111111 1101011110110
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 607
Words 119
Sentences 8
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 34
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 68
Words per stanza (avg) 17
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Submitted on June 05, 2015

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Ahmad Al_khatat

I started writing poems since I was ten years old, Most of my poems are free verse or proses.Which talked about sad dark and wild romance .Even some ones talking politics.http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Prose_poetryhttp://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Free_verse ahmad4all_2@hotmail.comMontreal - Canada Thank you more…

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