Analysis of Lasting impression




I walk on the beach and smell the water
fresh and salty it is
on my head a diving mask
waiting for me to use

I bend over and tip with my finger
some water on it to taste
I make a long face, disgusting
not so clever of me

I walk into the water and put my mask on
slide underwater and look around
I see all kind of beautiful fish
in the colours of the rainbow

I cannot open my mouth to gasp
when this beauty is hitting me
I quickly swim to the surface
astonished and dazzled as I am

I tread water for a while to
give the impressions a place
while I am listening to
the calmly rippling water


Scheme AXXX AXXB XXXX XBXX CXCA
Poetic Form Etheree  (25%)
Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 1110101010 101011 1110101 101111 1110011110 1101111 11011010 111011 110101001111 11000101 111111001 001101 110101111 11101101 11011010 010010111 11101011 1001001 1111001 01010010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 569
Words 124
Sentences 1
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 93
Words per stanza (avg) 25
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Submitted by Jet-Rood on July 28, 2014

Modified on March 05, 2023

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2023: In a world full of chaos, creativity is one of the helping things to keep yourself sane. ******************************** 2014: A good head and a good heart are always a formidable combination. But when you add to that a literate tongue or pen than you have something very special. - Nelson Mandela - ******************************** I am from the land of tulips and mills. Writing is a need like eating and sleeping. I think we are all wondrous creatures who deserve to love ourselves and live in freedom. I like to participate in cases which can make a difference for myself, my surroundings and the earth. My wish: humanity in a non-dualistic society. more…

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