Analysis of Kind offer



E.A.M Poetry
Happiness is freedom
 to do things freely
 and knowing that
 it is perfectly okay
 to make mistakes ...E.A.M
Kind offer
 
 
To make someone happy
Is directive from almighty?
Absolute personal freedom
But enjoyed seldom

We all know
River simply doesn't flow
It has message
Love in all the ages

Make no mistakes
So much is at stake
Human feelings and misery
All linked with poverty

Feel self poor
Love thee neighbor
There is eternal joy
You are destined to enjoy

How does happiness come?
Do we need to welcome?
It is free and easily available
One need not struggle

Take at free will
There is no extra bill
Feel free to part with others
As it may have kind offer


Scheme ABAXXBCDXAABB DXXX XXAA XCEE BBFF GGXC
Poetic Form
Metre 1100 100110 11110 0101 111001 11011 110 11 1 11110 10101010 1010010 10110 111 1010101 1110 101010 1101 11111 10100100 111100 111 1110 110101 1110101 111001 111110 11101000100 11110 1111 111101 1111110 1111110
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 690
Words 131
Sentences 12
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 13, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 33
Letters per line (avg) 17
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 94
Words per stanza (avg) 21
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Submitted on March 18, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Hasmukh Mehta

am an ex-serviceman from Indian Air force. I joined Oriental Insurance Company and retired from there too in May, 2007. I have been graduated from Punjab University. I hold technical qualification like Diploma in Radio/engineering .I have done English and Hindi stenography as well. I had mastered the art in Morse telephony too. I am associated with several welfare organizations and served long time as Union leader too. I am at present working as hobby writer. I write poems on various subjects and invite suggestions from all the quarters. I have written one memoir named “As I see it” and ready for publication. One interesting part of writing I would love to share with all my reader friends. I am not sure weather it may be the same case with all as I do not want to be caught in any controversy. When I sit on my personal computer, there is absolutely no thought in mind as to what is to be picked up as thought and written. These all things I leave it to the discretion of almighty to fill my mind with relevant ideas. So far I have been graced by Him and as result able to compose about 4000 poems. I have be awarded with 4 achievement award from the www.ezinearticles.com for successfully meeting with their standard. I am writing on many sites so as to be associated with reader friends all over the world. I am thankful to all those who have supported me in my initial days. more…

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