Analysis of Judge Me



"Don't judge,
lest ye be judged."
So the parable goes.

But if you avoid judgment,
you'll never know,
if your poetry ebbs,
or if it flows.

I say, "Judge Me".
Don't avert your eyes,
if your thought's unkind.
Do you think this the first time?

As a teen set asunder,
my political opponent put under,
by the words from my quill.
First in written prose,
then in oratory skill.

Yes, the basket hero,
with his scholarship paid,
slain in his prime.
Black ointment,white fly.

It was nothing personal,
I liked Kurt a lot.
But if you don't challenge them,
what kind of friends have you got?

So, set your sights on me,
onto nothing hold.
But, give me real judgment,
not a jealous pose.

The pettiness from haters,
will do nothing.
My rhymes will keep coming,
like the stench of sulfur from a hot spring.

Remember, poetry is our art,
handle it with care.
But, not with the disdain of an opinion undared.

For it is beauty we serve.
And, if my beauty is ugly to you,
then tell your truth.

Just not as a connoisseur,
observing from the side.
Expose me a fraud with your beauty,
don't let your poetry hide.


Scheme XAB CDXB EXXF GGHBH DXFX HIXI EXCB XJJJ XXA XXX GKEK
Poetic Form
Metre 11 1111 101001 1110110 1101 111001 1111 1111 10111 11101 1111011 1011010 10100010110 101111 10101 101001 101010 11101 1011 111 1110100 11101 1111101 1111111 111111 10101 111110 10101 0100110 1110 111110 1011101011 0101001101 10111 111001110101 1111011 0111011011 1111 111001 010101 011011110 1111001
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 1,049
Words 205
Sentences 23
Stanzas 11
Stanza Lengths 3, 4, 4, 5, 4, 4, 4, 4, 3, 3, 4
Lines Amount 42
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 75
Words per stanza (avg) 18
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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