Analysis of Inspiration from the lost



Caught in the aftermath on a rugged path,
No one knows the half God is the greatest friend to have,
Reaching for keeps to grasp once you digest then over lasp,
Off with the broken token onto another Rath,

From the forbidden chambers of a lost fact,
Of those who cut up with no reasons to act,
With complicated situations misused and smacked,
Through the review of clear view of one's who slack,

Dedication without the rest of paitence,
waiting seeing golden halls of a beautiful fregrance,
Hoping to get a smell of the motionless snail,
Who hardly budges but loves their misguided cousins,

Family are hard to get along with,
As legendary bones rip from a chromed hip,
Yet swift to get up with a lift,
As to see another life once their visible to their gift.


Scheme AXBA CCCX DDXD XBEE
Poetic Form
Metre 1001010101 1110111010111 10111111011101 1101010100101 10100101011 11111111011 11000100101 1011111111 010010111 1010101101001 101101101001 110111101010 1001111011 1100111011 11111101 111010111100111
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 742
Words 138
Sentences 2
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 38
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 151
Words per stanza (avg) 35
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Submitted on April 14, 2015

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Traveon Jermaine

I'm Traveon or you can call me Tra for short I've been writting poetry since I was about 14 years old. I'm a 4 time poet Award Receiver (2 Editors Choice Awards,Published Poet Award & The International Who's Who In Poetry Award) My 1st Editors Choice Award was for my poem What is Love and the 2nd was for my poem Dream. And the 3rd one I received was The Published Poet Award which is for my poem Love and Pain and I've always seen poems as a way of life. My 4th Award The Who's Who In Poetry Award was in honoree of me making relatable poems and also heart felt poems as well as being active here in The Poetry world of Poetry.com. Also I often base all of my poems off of my life experiences and what I've been through over the years. I also have 1 of my poems (What Is Love?) published in The Book "Collected Whispers" which is officially from the organization The Poetry Library. I like to always give my best effort into my work while inspiring others to keep doing well with theirs too. I don't criticize I only motivate and that's something that I will continue to do in the years to come. more…

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