Analysis of In this garden



In this garden
Scenery greeny
Painted a place in my heart.

The looks of it's attitude
Very colourful and intangible
I grow...sitting like a vegtable

Seeing results... living with great health
Thorns are not painted
To where it marks where I bled.
In this garden I am cared and fed.


Scheme AAX XBB XXCC
Poetic Form Tetractys  (30%)
Etheree  (20%)
Metre 0110 1001 1001011 011110 10100100 11101 100110111 11110 1111111 011011101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 272
Words 51
Sentences 6
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 4
Lines Amount 10
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 74
Words per stanza (avg) 17
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Submitted on September 07, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Jon Otano

The topics I write about are very diverse, so are the poetry styles I apply. I started writing poetry in high school in 05. I had written some poetry during class and showed some of my classmates who enjoyed it! I then was chosen to have my poetry in the school newspaper for each month! I done a lot of my work in the library. I met a woman who i showed my work to that worked there, and she said she knew a man that works on the radio! Then i was able to read two poems off the radio. A news reporter who appeared on the station as well decided to do a report on me and I've been writing ever sense. :) If Anybody want to friend request me on Facebook feel free too! Just look up Jon Otano I should be easy to find! :) more…

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