Trying out your love



Trying out for your love
I've never been loved.
Trying out the way I can touch
I've never had much...

I wished you would look at me
That's just a thing in the past
Trying out for your love
Eventually to get your attention.

To let it be known I am interested
Not just gases of smoke
To clear out the room.

Your love is worth trying out
As we can get lost in an ocean or neptune.
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Submitted on September 08, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme Axbb xxAx xxx xx
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 365
Words 78
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 3, 2

Jon Otano

The topics I write about are very diverse, so are the poetry styles I apply. I started writing poetry in high school in 05. I had written some poetry during class and showed some of my classmates who enjoyed it! I then was chosen to have my poetry in the school newspaper for each month! I done a lot of my work in the library. I met a woman who i showed my work to that worked there, and she said she knew a man that works on the radio! Then i was able to read two poems off the radio. A news reporter who appeared on the station as well decided to do a report on me and I've been writing ever sense. :) If Anybody want to friend request me on Facebook feel free too! Just look up Jon Otano I should be easy to find! :) more…

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