Analysis of In pursuit of being Number 1



I sit here alone tonight
A beer and this computer
Is my only worksite
I write things that tell alot of things
And sometimes dont mean anything
I get what everybody is saying
Some poems are wise some
Well they just fall like the skies
I guess I am lost for words rights now
God I dont Know how
I can ramble on and on about many things
Even about my flings
But I am done for tonight
I did give up a
Hell of a fight
To make my poetry right
For you to hear me
And I hope I speak to you
As much as you speak to me
I know I can leave everybody pleased
You may not like me
Or they way I write
But this is my appetite
All I have to say is
Goodnight


Scheme ABACDDEFGGCCAHAAIJIKIAALA
Poetic Form Tetractys  (24%)
Metre 1110101 0101010 11101 111110111 0011110 111100110 110111 1111101 111111111 11111 111010101101 100111 1111101 11110 1101 1111001 11111 0111111 1111111 111111001 11111 11111 111110 111111 1
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 616
Words 140
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 25
Lines Amount 25
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 501
Words per stanza (avg) 140
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Submitted on June 10, 2012

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Shawn Daniels

I am a man of various skills and sick and twisted minds.....yes minds... 800 dimensions I see things in and I like to become things............ only a portion of what I write is about personal experiences. The other portion is my mind inventing things up.. I may look at something and become that object and describe to you how it feels???? If you dare come enter the twisted and intellectual mind of me ...A.K.A " SuperShawn" I guarantee you once you learn how I see things you will too....Scary thought HUH!!!!!! muahhahahahahaah I do write A lot of haiku as well there short and to the point so dont judge me unless you know what haiku is! follow me on Twitter more…

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