Analysis of Ii win back ii




In the brief transit of life
Pray god not to see
The dark face of time
Keep wide open the window
See the fresh twilight
And ivory throne of vast blue
Flooded with moon's kisses
Between the rocks of destiny
The heartmay be pressed
May the voices shaken
May the conscience rebel
The mindmay perturb
Bones may  be in despair
Brocken into pieces
Dreams may shatter
To melt away in solitude
Time may mock at
 With all falsehood
May everything standstill around
Still raise the spirit inside
Take a chance to inhale
The green breath to smile
Between birth and dying
Give eyes to the time
Light many lamps tosoar
High against mortal darkness
Win back the life
With exalted heart again
---------------------------------------------BY   SATYA   PATTNAIK


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Poetic Form
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Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 716
Words 125
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 29
Lines Amount 29
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 568
Words per stanza (avg) 130
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Submitted on May 23, 2013

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