Analysis of If you love me……..



IF YOU LOVE ME……..

If you love me
I will give you my soul,
If you love me
You will become my goal.

If you love me
Will become blind
And see through your eye
And will never cry,

If you love me
Will become you tongue
Will sing your song
Will never bother the throng,

If you love me
I will become your heart
Will beat rhythmically pleasurably
Will absorb all the pain absurd,

If you love me
Will become your mind
Will take all your depressions
Never put you on hind,

If you love me
I will become your body
Will dance with melody
Never let fall any tragedy,

If you love me
I will become you
A duty full crew
Take you to the skies
No clouds no dew,

Even death comes
It will be me
Never you, never you
If you love me
I will leave heavens for you…..


Scheme A AbAb Acdd Axee Axbx Acxc Aaaa Affxf xafAf
Poetic Form Tetractys  (43%)
Metre 1111 1111 111111 1111 110111 1111 1011 01111 01101 1111 10111 1111 1101001 1111 110111 111001 10110101 1111 10111 1111010 101111 1111 1101110 111100 101110100 1111 11011 01011 11101 1111 1011 1111 101101 1111 1111011
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 714
Words 153
Sentences 3
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 1, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 5, 5
Lines Amount 35
Letters per line (avg) 16
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 64
Words per stanza (avg) 17
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Submitted on June 25, 2012

Modified on March 05, 2023

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