Analysis of I Wish Upon



I wish upon the brightest star
To light the night with wonders of heart
Even in the darkest of hour
A blooming flower shines the colour

For this feeling of hurt inside
Seems to be a never-ending story
Covered by the mist so white
I wonder why it loses its glory

Never again, never will
He says with all his willing
Not that I want you still
Take a step and find your healing

Then I wish upon the sun
To chase away that gloomy shine
Just a warmth of touch by one
Let me find this love again..


Scheme AXXA XBXB CDCD EXEX
Poetic Form Quatrain  (50%)
Metre 11010101 110111011 100010110 01010101 11101101 1110101010 1010111 1101110110 1001101 1111110 111111 10101110 1110101 11011101 1011111 1111101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 476
Words 99
Sentences 1
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 97
Words per stanza (avg) 25
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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