Analysis of I took the flying saucer with me.



I took the flying saucer with me.
(j'ai pris la soucoupe volante avec moi.)

aucune douleur avec les dames de dentiste
 J'ai aussi eu mes dents blanchies
 de sorte que ma bouche,
 ressemble plus à la vôtre

j'ai pris la soucoupe volante avec moi.
 il est dans le garage.
 maintenant je peux voler,
 mondes extérieurs.

ce matin,
 je vais aller soulever des poids.
 pour le sauna,
 je viens sors.

dents blanches, la sueur et les étreinte

I took the flying saucer with me.
(j'ai pris la soucoupe volante avec moi. )

Hi Dearest
 No pain with the dentist ladies.
 I also had my teeth whitened
 so that my mouth,
 now looks more like yours.

I took the flying saucer with me.
 It is in the garage
 Now I can fly
 to outer worlds.

This morning,
 I will go lift weights.
 For the sauna
 I just step outside.

White teeth, sweat, and hugs.

©anna laurencio /2014
 06.26.14.thurs.sf

the poetess is learned as well as knowing
arrant, as well as scrupulous for all the topiary and charm, you could
read straight thru this series and discovered single uterance of realization.
thanks my friends, injoy the read, ever, annie


Scheme AB cdxe Bfed gdgd c AB cdcxd Afxd hdgc d dx hcga
Poetic Form
Metre 110101011 1111101011 1111111 1111111 11111 11111 1111101011 1011001 1111 111 11 1110111 1010 111 1111111 110101011 1111101011 110 11101010 1101111 1111 11111 110101011 110001 1111 1101 110 11111 1010 11111 11101 101 1 011111110 101111001101000111 111110001010111010 1111011010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,202
Words 213
Sentences 25
Stanzas 12
Stanza Lengths 2, 4, 4, 4, 1, 2, 5, 4, 4, 1, 2, 4
Lines Amount 37
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 70
Words per stanza (avg) 16
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Submitted on July 31, 2017

Modified on March 05, 2023

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