Analysis of I Love Pinning Stars in your Universe



I adore the taste
of your piquant wit,
the way your words
sprinkle kisses
in uncharted sensations.

Held captive
the moment
you exhale, until
your warm breath
finds its mark
on my naked skin.

I mould to the shape
of subliminal notes
your eyes deliver
with such intensity.

Enveloped in
your musky aroma
I find my way home.


Scheme XXXXX XXXXXA XXXX AXX
Poetic Form
Metre 10101 11101 0111 1010 0010010 110 010 10101 111 111 11101 11101 101001 11010 110100 0100 110010 11111
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 303
Words 58
Sentences 5
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 5, 6, 4, 3
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 14
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 64
Words per stanza (avg) 15
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Submitted on May 02, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Storm

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ NOTE: 5 Feb 2011 - Dear All, I have deleted and then reinstated all my poems on my page so I could get rid of the bad atmosphere, 1-ratings and nasty tags there have been of late. I know this means I won't be in the leaderboard but that's OK.I want to start anew and more importantly, see if the number of rates match the reviews. If poems continue to be 1-rated, then I will know that Ian is/was not the only one cheating here.I apologise to all those who have previously commented on my poems. I am sorry your comments are no longer there.I regret any inconvenience caused. Happy writing to all! :)~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~I am an enigma wrapped in a mystery ~ a flowerchild of the Universe. I am well travelled and love learning about different cultures.I have been writing poetry for 30 years, the last three of which I have written in earnest.I laugh my way through life and tears, searching for enlightenment. I don't suffer fools gladly.I am here to write, it is my passion. I am influenced by music, lyrics and the poetry of many people, too many to mention.I don't like pedestrian poetry or purple prose. I am never content with my poems, always striving to improve. I welcome critique. more…

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