Analysis of i hate mechanics



U were the reason for my sadness
U were the reason for my madness
i hated u like hell
and u hated me as well,
U were my nightmare
BUT,U made me stand still
although u were my enemy ,
U still wanted to help me .
i had no other choice
but i had to give my voice
i made up with U
and i believed U
U said U would take my hand
and there was no other chance
U kept UR promise
and i kept mine too
and now that i've passed
i never wanna see u
neither in my dreams nor in my daydreams.
Dear MECHANICS :P
see what U did to me????
u made me write a poem and about who?
ABOUT U !! isnt it weird? write about a subject ? yes it is and i know.
so sure U know that i still hate U
BUT that we're now done,
i beated UR *ss up !!!!!


Scheme AABBCDEEFFGGHIAGJGKEEGLGMN
Poetic Form
Metre 100101110 100101110 110111 0110111 1011 11111 1101100 1110111 111101 1111111 11111 01011 1111111 0111101 11110 01111 01111 1101011 100111011 10101 111111 11110100011 011111101001111011 111111111 11111 11111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 689
Words 159
Sentences 9
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 26
Lines Amount 26
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 527
Words per stanza (avg) 163
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Submitted on October 15, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Nadine M.oraby

heyoo !! am Nadine !! an 18 year old egyptian girl!! =D i'm a ballerina,a guitarist and a writer :Dwell actually writing is a hobby..am not really A professional writer but my friends like my poems and think am really talented :) !! so i decided to post my poems here on that site to see your comment about my poems>>>some let me down and some encouraged me to continue writing and correct my mistakes :D thats really great to learn from the greatest poets !! =D i love photography too!! well,i hope you would read my poems and tell me what you think :) dont worry ,i dont bite :-p more…

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