Analysis of I asked God; how do I live my life the best way



I asked God; how do I live my life the best way
Learn from your mistakes; regret it everyday
Handle present with confidence; is the best way
Prepare for future; to achieve do a bit everyday

Whatever you have be happy in; is the best way
What you want; plan cleverly; follow up; everyday
When possible serve others do it a visionary way
To overcome doubts; look within; is spiritual way

Remember without God; Monday; is a Mourn-day
If you are in not touch Tuesday will be a Tears-day
And if live carefree Wednesday will be a Waste-day
Without helping others; Thursday will be a thirst-day

Do good deed on Friday; to make it a fruitful day
On Saturday do noble work; if not will be a Sad-day
On Sunday don't sit in front of TV; will prove a Sin-day
Life is short; be forget; and forgive in nature; everyday

See how beautiful life is; to live like a saint; everyday
Never let any doubt to come in; all days are good day
If you live an ethical life; everyday will be a blessed day
It brings peace of both worlds to live life; a serene way.


Scheme AAAA AAAA AAAA AAAA AAAA
Poetic Form Quatrain 
Metre 111111111011 11101011101 101011001011 01110101101101 101111001011 1111100101101 11001101101001 1101101110001 010011101011 1110111011011 01111011011 011010111011 1111101110101 110011011111011 11110111111011 111101001010101 111001111101101 10110111011111 1111100110111011 1111111110011
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 1,016
Words 197
Sentences 1
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 40
Words per line (avg) 10
Letters per stanza (avg) 161
Words per stanza (avg) 39
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Submitted on September 27, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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