Analysis of Heart says



HEART SAYS      By satya    pattnaik

I dribbled the time
Like foot ball
Without looking to the post
Did not listen to the world
Of my tears, even
Did not care for the destination
My heart beat fast and alarmed
Not to fly harsh
That the sky would break away
Into pieces
Clouds would forget to gather rain
Wings would get tight and freeze
Vision of light would deceive
Pages of life would remain blank
Hours would not count for your luck
Questions of life
Would remain unanswered
Impulses would get dry
Now the heart says
Just take a shelter in yourself
Gather love songs and tears
Cordon your thoughts
To germinate green eternal leaf
To count each day
Of your life with happiness
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Scheme A XXXXXXXXBXXXXAAXXXXXXXXBX
Poetic Form
Metre 111101 11001 111 0110101 1110101 11110 11110010 1111001 1111 1011101 0110 11011101 111101 1011101 10111011 10111111 1011 10110 100111 1011 11010001 101101 1011 11010101 1111 1111100 1
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 685
Words 124
Sentences 1
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 1, 26
Lines Amount 27
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 274
Words per stanza (avg) 66
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Submitted on January 10, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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