Analysis of Happy moments



Her eyes are like pleasant lotus.
Her smile is overshadowing jasmine petals
Mother of creation is bathing in the ocean
Her long blacky hair shines divinely
While touching her feet even water
 Get reddish by seeing this redness
Of her feet sun feels shy   rises lately
Because his   morning redness is
Dominated by her divine feet's shine
The white elephants are throwing water
With lotus flowers on her pretty face
Lord Narayana is seeing his queen in
Milky sea by sleeping   on the adisesha
 Ocean felt glad   for her divine touch
The mother of manmatha has taken bath
With white elephants in fine morning

She enjoys very heart fully her bath in the sea


Scheme AXXBCABXXCXXDDXX B
Poetic Form
Metre 01111010 011101001010 1010101100010 01111010 110011010 110110110 1011111010 01110101 100100111 0110011010 1101010101 11110110 101110101 101110011 010111101 111000110 1011011001001
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 638
Words 114
Sentences 2
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 16, 1
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 31
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 265
Words per stanza (avg) 61
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Submitted on December 20, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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