Analysis of Gustav, a brother.



A smile like charcoal,
Spreads across my mind,
Marking a sandstone thought,
A brother of mine.

Bead wrapped wrists,
Thin frames rising from the ocean,
Truly a good and noble soul,
Deaf to the crashes of the ocean.

An embrace projects to me,
Tiny expansions to a smile,
Unveiled, blinding admiration,
Don’t you dare leave.

A Swede of style and charisma,
The sun twists from your glare,
Hours crystallize and glisten,
Your whiskers make a jolly moment.


Scheme AXXX XBAB XXBX XXBX
Poetic Form Quatrain  (25%)
Metre 0111 10111 10011 01011 111 11101010 10010101 110101010 1011011 10010101 0110010 1111 01110010 011111 1010010 110101010
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 437
Words 77
Sentences 4
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 89
Words per stanza (avg) 19
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Akira Dawn

I just thought it would be interesting to get a little feedback on what I write. It is often quite abstract and truly not great (this is not my self-deprecation shining through), but I would really love to improve.I am inspired by the works of Mark Twain in particular, he is amongst the wisest men ever to have lived. more…

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