Analysis of Grief...



I am trying to tell you
My grief from within
Why this blue sky looks grey and dim...
I saw real spring once in blue moon
At once I played sweet sombre tune
Trees now frozen and garden without trim..
Why this blue sky looks grey and dim..
Stars were floating once in deep waters
Birds also kept mum..closed all shutters
My body numb and limbs cannot swim..
Why this blue sky looks grey and dim..
Please do not pamper me ..let wind blow
Even is sun around..it may snow
Hope all time flies.. finish my whim
Why this blue sky looks grey and dim...!


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Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 530
Words 107
Sentences 10
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 15
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 417
Words per stanza (avg) 105
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Submitted on July 12, 2014

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Shantanu Chindhade

I am an eye specialist practicing in Pune city for the last 25 yrs or so.Writing poetry in my mother tongue for the last 45 yrs .My two collections are released.English poetry is a new avenue for me and I am trying my best to come out.I write prose as well.I run a group of amateur poets and writers in Pune city for the last 27 yrs just to keep my interest alive in literature and literary world. more…

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