Analysis of Gone



The second she walks out the door
It just feels wrong
It's not a feeling of being alone
But a longing...

Wanting her to stay
Wanting to say "I love you"
Just one more time
She's got my heart on a straight line

That long kiss goodnight in the rain
The smell of her hair on my clothes
Driving me insane
Wonderfully and indelibly stained
On all of my memories

Remnants and imprints
Of her beauty and symmetry
As I hold her close —
The one thing in this world
That I want most

But alas, the day resigns
And I pretend that I'm fine
But the truth be told
I'll be missing her before long

One more kiss
"I'll call you in a minute."
It always feels so unfinished
And then...she's gone

(But I'm praying to God
That it won't be for long)


Scheme XAXX XXXB CXCXX XXXXX XBXA XXXX XA
Poetic Form
Metre 01011101 1111 1101011001 1010 10011 1011111 1111 11111011 1111001 01101111 10101 1000001001 1111100 10001 10100100 11101 011011 1111 1010101 0101111 10111 11100011 111 1110010 1111010 011 111011 111111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 701
Words 146
Sentences 4
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 5, 5, 4, 4, 2
Lines Amount 28
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 80
Words per stanza (avg) 21
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Submitted on August 11, 2017

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Shon White

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