Analysis of god wait's



the doctor said he will be gone by next morning
the hour was long but hard
but she wait by his side
some time she cried ,some time she prayed
but she never gave up on him
as she wait  she said he would be fine
just wait and you well see
but the doctor didn't believe her
he said, he well be gone; just wait and you well see
she said, no, your wrong
you just wait and you well see
5 hours latter, nothing have change in him.
the night was long but hard
but she still wait
next morning his heart was week
and he fading fast .
the doctor walk in
and said i'm sorry but he gone
she said i well wait bye his side
as she wait
 she start to pray
god wait's to hear
what she had to say
he awoke ,bye her side
saying i well stay.


Scheme ABCDEFGHGIGEBJKLMNCJOPOCO
Poetic Form Tetractys  (32%)
Metre 010111111110 0101111 111111 11111111 11101111 111111111 110111 101010010 111111110111 11111 1110111 1010101101 011111 1111 1101111 01101 01010 01110111 11111111 111 1111 1111 11111 101101 10111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 696
Words 154
Sentences 4
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 25
Lines Amount 25
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 551
Words per stanza (avg) 156
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Submitted on August 21, 2014

Modified on March 05, 2023

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