Analysis of Gloomy Smile



Although I've found it hard to laugh these days
 I have my moments when I sit amazed
The jokes that seem to spill out your mouth
Have me in stiches for time to come

You're pretty funny
I have to admit
They say laughter is the best medicine
Is it true?
 A fake sense of happiness
 It's what I see in you

Is that smile real
 The one you put out.
You seem to fool others
But I see right through you

It's pretty selfless
To act happy all the time
When you're feeling all gloomy
On the inside

You're pretty funny I have to admit
They say laughter is the best medicine
Is it true?
A fake sense of happiness Is what I see in you


Scheme xxxx abCDed xxxd exax bCDd
Poetic Form
Metre 111111111 1111011101 011111111 11011111 11010 11101 1110101100 111 0111100 111101 1111 01111 111110 111111 11010 1110101 1110110 1001 1101011101 1110101100 111 0111100111101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 602
Words 127
Sentences 4
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 6, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 22
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 96
Words per stanza (avg) 25
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Submitted on October 15, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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