Analysis of FOUR YEARS (revised)



Though we haven't seen one another in four years,
Four years doesn't seem near long enough.
Years that have been the best of my life,
Have been so only because you were not apart of it.
Gone are the days of your callous manipulations
By your carelessly-utilized femininity.
I once thought we'd be together forever,
Still, I often find myself wishing I had never even met you.
Miss Oh-So-Pretty, who had me wrapped around her finger,
You were the worst thing that ever happened to me.
Dearly, I paid, for giving myself to you.


Scheme ABCDEFGHGFH
Poetic Form
Metre 111011010011 111011101 111101111 11110011010111 110111100010 11100100100 11111010010 1110111011101011 11110111101010 100111101011 1011110111
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 515
Words 94
Sentences 6
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 11
Lines Amount 11
Letters per line (avg) 37
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 412
Words per stanza (avg) 94
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Submitted on April 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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el_cazador_verde

I am a university student from Texas, and a bit of a closet-poet. Perhaps I should keep it in the closet, but I am interested in getting feedback on some of my poetry. Let me know what you think! I used to write a lot of poetry when I was a little kid, but eventually lost interest as I got older. I started writing poetry again as a form of art-therapy during a really hard time in my life. I like to try to experiment with different styles and strange metaphors. Understandably, this can make some of my poetry less accessible at times, but occasionally I feel like it pays off. more…

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