Analysis of Father Forgive Me



Father forgive me for my sins
What is in my mind Father, I don't know where to even begin
I have yet to do anything in the flesh, but I am weak
The thoughts of carnal knowledge raced through my mind, as I innocently kissed her cheek
Father please grant me the strength to resist
I will need you more than ever,  once our lips finally meet in a kiss
Lord keep me on the righteous path with your word to ponder
I fear as she is close and I touch her skin, my hands will wander
I ask for forgiveness now Father, please hear my cries
My mind may be strong, but my body will be weak once I meet the gaze of her eyes


Scheme ABCCDEFFGG
Poetic Form
Metre 10011111 1101110111111001 11111100011111 01110101111111000101 1011101101 1111111011011001001 11110101111110 1111110110111110 1110101101111 11111111011111101101
Closest metre Iambic octameter
Characters 601
Words 126
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 10
Lines Amount 10
Letters per line (avg) 48
Words per line (avg) 13
Letters per stanza (avg) 476
Words per stanza (avg) 127
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Submitted by HollowMan on March 31, 2016

Modified on March 06, 2023

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