Analysis of FAR AWAY CAN STILL FEEL CLOSE (Poem #266)



Moving away from my family and friends.
Days are long, like having no ends.

So I sit and ponder just what can I do?
I think of ideas that are the usual few,

Sending cards, letters or a phone call;
There must be something else; it can't be all.

I miss their faces while I sit and think.
Then this idea comes to me in a wink.

I'll get a little book, the picture album kind,
Put in it pictures of family and friends I find,

Reminders then of birthdays and other dates;
To visit to a new home, a map inside waits.

A card with address and numbers of phone,
Now I look them up not feeling so alone.

Visiting, I update pictures or add a new face.
Not seeming far, I'm just at my home base.

© Copyright 8/1/1999 by Jean E. Gorney


Scheme AA BB CC DD EE FF GG HH X
Poetic Form
Metre 10011110001 11111011 11101011111 1110101101001 101101011 1111011111 1111011101 11010111001 110101010101 1011011000111 0101110101 110101101011 011101011 11111110101 1001011011011 1101111111 1011110
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 706
Words 145
Sentences 12
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 32
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 61
Words per stanza (avg) 16
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Submitted on March 02, 2017

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Jean Gorney

I wrote a poem for my daughter and new son-in-law and read it at their wedding reception in 1997. People have been encouraging me ever since. I try to write up-beat and happy poetry. My poetry has been in many anthologies, newspapers, church bulletins,etc. I won a small contest once. I self-published some small(4x5)books with about 16 poems in each that can be used as greeting cards. I include an envelope for mailing. Check them out on my FB page under Jean Magill Gorney. more…

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