Analysis of False Hope



How quietly the air stirs,
with running breaths and eyes, a blur.
There is a hand— five fingers,
that hold a match to elicit hope,
but the flame is never lit.

Like cinders, disappointment smoulders
burdening smiles and bony shoulders.
The embers, once stoked by feeble hope
fade to dark too quickly,
leaving the dark to consume.

- Asher J. Bond


Scheme AXABX AABXX X
Poetic Form
Metre 1100011 11010101 1101110 110110101 1011101 1100101 100101010 010111101 111110 1001101 1011
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 336
Words 61
Sentences 6
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 5, 5, 1
Lines Amount 11
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 90
Words per stanza (avg) 20
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Submitted on September 02, 2012

Modified on March 05, 2023

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