Analysis of Falling Hail (Part VIII)



How is this
The time is anew
But another dream
Of this hideous crew
They are falling
From out of the sky
Hitting the earth
Bewildered I sigh
The smoke rising
From all the holes
They are coming
Don't be human fools
They mean us harm
You need to know
These dreams are
Real and vividly so
Prepare for defense
Protect your home
Guard your fence
Your on your own...


Scheme ABCBDEFEDGDHIJKJLMLN
Poetic Form Tetractys  (55%)
Etheree  (30%)
Metre 111 01101 10101 111001 1110 11101 1001 01011 0110 1101 1110 11101 1111 1111 111 101001 01101 0111 111 1111
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 341
Words 70
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 20
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 14
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 287
Words per stanza (avg) 70
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Submitted on April 27, 2010

Modified on March 05, 2023

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