Analysis of Fallen Angel (Experimenting Dizain -10 syllables/10 lines in ababbcacdd format)



Flying in the sky I felt free of fear
With eagles I soar with angles I dwell
My mind unperturbed, conscious crystal clear
Then I made a blunder and broke the spell
Suddenly from heaven on earth I fell
What have I done? As human I am born
I suffer, I grieve, hurt I am o' dear
Mercy Lord, save me before I am torn
Openly I will confess to you God
Because in you I seek refuge, Lord.


Scheme ABABBCACDE
Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Etheree  (20%)
Metre 1000111111 1101111011 110110101 1110100101 1001101111 1111110111 1101111111 1011101111 1001101111 010111101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 372
Words 79
Sentences 3
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 10
Lines Amount 10
Letters per line (avg) 30
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 295
Words per stanza (avg) 79
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Submitted on August 08, 2017

Modified on April 05, 2023

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