Analysis of The House Of Dust: Part 04: 07: The sun goes down in a cold pale flare of light

Conrad Potter Aiken 1889 (Savannah, Georgia) – 1973 (Savannah, Georgia)



The sun goes down in a cold pale flare of light.
The trees grow dark: the shadows lean to the east:
And lights wink out through the windows, one by one.
A clamor of frosty sirens mourns at the night.
Pale slate-grey clouds whirl up from the sunken sun.

And the wandering one, the inquisitive dreamer of dreams,
The eternal asker of answers, stands in the street,
And lifts his palms for the first cold ghost of rain.
The purple lights leap down the hill before him.
The gorgeous night has begun again.

'I will ask them all, I will ask them all their dreams,
I will hold my light above them and seek their faces,
I will hear them whisper, invisible in their veins. . . . '
The eternal asker of answers becomes as the darkness,
Or as a wind blown over a myriad forest,
Or as the numberless voices of long-drawn rains.

We hear him and take him among us like a wind of music,
Like the ghost of a music we have somewhere heard;
We crowd through the streets in a dazzle of pallid lamplight,
We pour in a sinister mass, we ascend a stair,
With laughter and cry, with word upon murmured word,
We flow, we descend, we turn. . . . and the eternal dreamer
Moves on among us like light, like evening air . . .

Good night! good night! good night! we go our ways,
The rain runs over the pavement before our feet,
The cold rain falls, the rain sings.
We walk, we run, we ride.  We turn our faces
To what the eternal evening brings.

Our hands are hot and raw with the stones we have laid,
We have built a tower of stone high into the sky.
We have built a city of towers.
Our hands are light, they are singing with emptiness.
Our souls are light.  They have shaken a burden of hours. . . .
What did we build it for?  Was it all a dream? . . .
Ghostly above us in lamplight the towers gleam . . .
And after a while they will fall to dust and rain;
Or else we will tear them down with impatient hands;
And hew rock out of the earth, and build them again.


Scheme AXBAB CDEXF CGHIXH XJAKJXK XDLGL XXMIMNNEXF
Poetic Form
Metre 01110011111 0111011101 01111010111 010110101101 11111110101 001001001001011 0010101101001 01111011111 01011101011 010110101 111111111111 1111101101110 1111100100011 001010110011010 1101110010010 1101101111 111011011101110 10110101111 1110100101101 1100100110101 110011101101 11101110001010 11011111101 11111111101 0111001001101 0111011 111111111010 110010101 1011101101111 1110101110101 111010110 1011111101100 101111110010110 11111111101 10011010101 010011111101 111111110101 011110101101
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,906
Words 369
Sentences 43
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 5, 5, 6, 7, 5, 10
Lines Amount 38
Letters per line (avg) 39
Words per line (avg) 10
Letters per stanza (avg) 245
Words per stanza (avg) 65
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

1:50 min read
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Conrad Potter Aiken

Conrad Potter Aiken was a Pulitzer Prize-winning American author born in Savannah Georgia whose work includes poetry short stories novels and an autobiography more…

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