Analysis of Faces People Love



My brother touches music with his hands.
He slowly shapes the chords with gentle palms
and smoothes the rigid edges. With a nudge
of one brown finger, he imprints himself
in songs of lakes and forests, mountains, stars,
and he is suddenly a part of all
the things that are important. He creates
without a word, his legacy of sound
beginning with a single note. It rings
across the morning stillness of our house
and tells a thousand stories, molding earth
into a happy, tragic heaven for
an instant. Others come together then,
a symphony of possibilities,
my brother smiling, sculpting rhythms in
the images of faces, people, love.
The world will know my brother when he goes
as one would know the passing of a breeze:
one moment cool, refreshed, and filled with hope,
the next, an ache, an emptiness, a loss.


Scheme ABCDEFGHIJKLMNOPQNRS
Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Etheree  (20%)
Metre 1101010111 1101011101 0101010101 1111010101 0111010101 0111000111 0111010101 0101110011 0101010111 01010101101 0101010101 0101010101 1101010101 010010100 1101010100 0100110101 0111110111 1111010101 1101010111 0111110001
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 790
Words 143
Sentences 7
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 20
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 32
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 641
Words per stanza (avg) 143
Font size:
 

Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

42 sec read
9

Discuss this Jenny Pirkle poem analysis with the community:

0 Comments

    Citation

    Use the citation below to add this poem analysis to your bibliography:

    Style:MLAChicagoAPA

    "Faces People Love" Poetry.com. STANDS4 LLC, 2024. Web. 30 Apr. 2024. <https://www.poetry.com/poem-analysis/70797/faces-people-love>.

    Become a member!

    Join our community of poets and poetry lovers to share your work and offer feedback and encouragement to writers all over the world!

    More poems by

    Jenny Pirkle

    »

    April 2024

    Poetry Contest

    Join our monthly contest for an opportunity to win cash prizes and attain global acclaim for your talent.
    0
    days
    5
    hours
    59
    minutes

    Special Program

    Earn Rewards!

    Unlock exciting rewards such as a free mug and free contest pass by commenting on fellow members' poems today!

    Browse Poetry.com

    Quiz

    Are you a poetry master?

    »
    William Blake: "Tiger Tiger, burning bright, In the forests of the _________".
    A night
    B knight
    C bites
    D fight