Analysis of Eyes shall sparkle



My mind will blossom up slowly
Though the stars on the horizon shut
The spring at my doorsteps
Shall bring for soothing air abrupt...
That intense charming lake
Harbouring thirsty blue cloud
My unlucky dwindling future
Shall open up and sing aloud
Though moon light from my feast leaks
And tunes whither away from my lips
Future lines on my forehead disappear
Leaves of deep grief sprout up
How do I control my lust for words
As my hands are too frozen
Even if eyes shed tears again,
Hoping they will light up heaven...!


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Poetic Form
Metre 11110110 101100101 01111 11110101 101101 11011 101010010 11010101 1111111 011001111 101111001 111111 111011111 1111110 10111101 10111110
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 505
Words 94
Sentences 3
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 16
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 419
Words per stanza (avg) 94
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Submitted on April 18, 2015

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Shantanu Chindhade

I am an eye specialist practicing in Pune city for the last 25 yrs or so.Writing poetry in my mother tongue for the last 45 yrs .My two collections are released.English poetry is a new avenue for me and I am trying my best to come out.I write prose as well.I run a group of amateur poets and writers in Pune city for the last 27 yrs just to keep my interest alive in literature and literary world. more…

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