Analysis of Eyes



Until I'm born I'm dying
The road is long and winding
I've seen the world behind me
So I know there's more like me
I been at the crossroads done this before
Swore to my soul that I wouldn't go further
But I'm still in motion – Supposed to coast to the ocean
But the under tow is forceful
I got a suitcase
With a blue suit
Become a little two face a little too soon
In a cramped room
Turned on the vacuum
Suck the oxygen out now
Death looms

I see all of the eyes entirely
I see all of them I see all of them


Scheme AABBXXXXXXXCCXX BX
Poetic Form
Metre 0111110 0111010 1101011 1111111 111011101 11111110110 11101001111010 10101110 1101 1011 010101101011 0011 11010 1010011 11 1111010100 1111111111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 492
Words 108
Sentences 1
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 15, 2
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 196
Words per stanza (avg) 54
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Submitted on June 30, 2016

Modified on March 05, 2023

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