Analysis of excerpt 15



Upon arrival, everything that had  moved beforehand,   was belly up, like an aquatic DMZ.  The peculiar evaporation, created  a perfect rainbow. The only rainbow   known to mankind, with   long term side effects..

To us the kids, it was like  a renewal of the old covenant.  The creation of a brand new  modern covenant,  done by  human hands, humans style.  One huge industrial pipe,  was enough for all the waist  elimination, although, there  were several small pipes  around, that we didn't take  into consideration.

C 2014 SaltShackles.com


Scheme X X X
Poetic Form
Metre 010101011101110111010100100010010001101011111111101 1101111001010110000101011101001110110111010011011101001011010110111101010010 11
Characters 542
Words 87
Sentences 8
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 3
Letters per line (avg) 139
Words per line (avg) 35
Letters per stanza (avg) 139
Words per stanza (avg) 35
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Submitted on July 10, 2014

Modified on March 05, 2023

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