Analysis of Empty Garden



As the sun goes down;
my loneliness grows.
In my apathy, I drown;
to dust, returns my rose.

In my empty garden;
nothing beautiful grows.
Dirt is the only pardon;
not even water flows.

It is barren and lifeless;
not even the flies visit.
In this misery, is bliss;
as, I alone, I sit.

This garden knows no love;
only sacrifice lives here.
No promises from above;
only pain and despair.

So, as one, I sit;
bitterly, the wind blows.
All I feel is the grit;
and suffering is all that grows.


Scheme ABAB CBCB XXXD EXEX DBDB
Poetic Form Quatrain  (60%)
Etheree  (25%)
Metre 10111 11001 0110011 110111 011010 101001 1101010 110101 1110010 1100110 0110011 110111 110111 101011 1100101 101001 11111 100011 111101 01001111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 466
Words 92
Sentences 10
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 73
Words per stanza (avg) 18
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Submitted on February 05, 2015

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Gabriel McBride

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